i3 - improved tiling WM


Small improvements to manual page.

Patch status: merged

Patch by Vincent Bernat

Long description:

Use a bulleted list for the IMPROVEMENTS section. Fix some
grammar. Remove the use of "fuck" which may offend some people.

To apply this patch, use:
curl http://cr.i3wm.org/patch/208/raw.patch | git am

b/i3lock.1

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 .SH IMPROVEMENTS
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-.TP
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-* i3lock forks, so you can combine it with an alias to suspend to RAM (run "i3lock && echo mem > /sys/power/state" to get a locked screen after waking up your computer from suspend to RAM)
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-.TP
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-* You can specify either a background color or a PNG image which will be displayed while your screen is locked.
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-.TP
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-* You can specify whether i3lock should bell upon a wrong password.
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-.TP
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-* i3lock uses PAM and therefore is compatible with LDAP etc.
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+.IP \[bu] 2
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+i3lock forks, so you can combine it with an alias to suspend to RAM (run "i3lock && echo mem > /sys/power/state" to get a locked screen after waking up your computer from suspend to RAM)
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+.IP \[bu]
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+You can specify either a background color or a PNG image which will be displayed while your screen is locked.
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+.IP \[bu]
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+You can specify whether i3lock should bell upon a wrong password.
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+.IP \[bu]
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+i3lock uses PAM and therefore is compatible with LDAP, etc.
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 .SH OPTIONS
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@@ -72,7 +69,7 @@ you did not disable this in your X server).
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 .TP
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 .B \-u, \-\-no-unlock-indicator
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-Disables the unlock indicator. i3lock will by default show an unlock indicator
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+Disable the unlock indicator. i3lock will by default show an unlock indicator
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 after pressing keys. This will give feedback for every keypress and it will
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 show you the current PAM state (whether your password is currently being
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 verified or whether it is wrong).
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 .TP
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 .BI \-c\  rrggbb \fR,\ \fB\-\-color= rrggbb
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-Turns the screen into the given color instead of white. Color must be given in 6-byte
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-format: rrggbb (i.e. ff0000 is red)
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+Turn the screen into the given color instead of white. Color must be given in 6-byte
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+format: rrggbb (i.e. ff0000 is red).
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 .TP
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 .B \-t, \-\-tiling
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 .BI \-p\  win|default \fR,\ \fB\-\-pointer= win|default
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 If you specify "default",
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 .B i3lock
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-does not hide your Mousepointer. If you specify "win",
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+does not hide your mouse pointer. If you specify "win",
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 .B i3lock
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-displays a hardcoded Windows-Pointer (thus enabling you to fuck with your
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-friends by using a Screenshot of a Windows-Desktop as a locking-screen).
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+displays a hardcoded Windows-Pointer (thus enabling you to mess with your
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+friends by using a screenshot of a Windows desktop as a locking-screen).
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 .SH SEE ALSO
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 .IR xautolock(1)